This morning, I was thinking about you in Florence, only this time the guy pulled a knife while he was sucking your cock because he knew you were going to bail, and he told you to push the back of his head onto your cock, and you did, you pulled his mouth onto your cock, shoving your cock down the back of his throat, lost in how good it feels, terrified and hard, with him holding the knife against your groin, and he stops before you come, and stands up and with the knife at your neck makes you kiss him, properly, and you are scared, with his pulling your mouth against his, his urgent insistence, you taste your cock on him, his tongue raping your mouth. And you are thinking about what he is going to make you do, looking to the door, wondering if you would make it.
Then snippets, him shoving you onto his bed and ripping your pants down, ‘Show me your arse, boy’ and then it was me and not him and you are trembling and you roll onto your stomach and with your face down on the bed, you get up on your knees with your arse to me, and I run the knife in a line down your arse, over your arsehole, pushing against your skin until I think it is going to cut you, then I cut you, moving down to your balls, and raking the knife over them at random and then against the underside of your cock, there is blood.
And you are making a moaning sound and shaking and I hit your cock and balls with the flat of the knife and that makes your body rock, and I am him and I am looking at your arse, my cock hard and heavy, and I rub it against you, whatever part of you I can reach, sliding it between your cheeks then down, between your legs, slipping against the blood.
I roll you over and shove your legs up and hold the knife against your cock, the tip pressed tight into the flesh, and I shove my cock into your arse in one brutal thrust, and you try to get away because it fucking hurts and you have your eyes squeezed shut, and your mouth open and I fuck you, dry and wretched, feeling your arse tight around my cock, so fucking tight and I slap your face and tell you to ‘look at me, you fucking bitch’, and I shove my cock harder into you and look at your face and I call you a ‘prick tease and a fucking idiot foreign tourist’, that ‘you are no more than a fuck-hole and I am going to bring my friends around to teach you a lesson’, and I am slapping your face and you can’t look at me, and I keep telling you to ‘fucking look at me while I fuck your arse’, and my fucking you is pushing you up on the bed and I keep having to pull you back down, slamming you onto my cock.
And I shove my fingers into your open mouth and you can’t help it, you suck on them, and that makes me laugh because ‘you fucking love this, you slut’, and I shove as many fingers as I can into your mouth, fuck your mouth and throat with them, your body convulsing as you gag and that hits my cock, and I tell you ‘fuck me’ and you want to do what you are told, ‘fuck me, you fucking little whore’, and I stay still and you are grabbing onto the bedclothes, trying to get some leverage to shove yourself against my cock, and my fingers in the back of your throat are doubling up your body, which makes your arse push against my cock, makes you squeeze it, and I like that so I shove my hand as hard as I can into your throat, saliva running out of your mouth, and it hurts your mouth and throat and I am concentrating on your fists, grabbing desperately at the bed trying to get a grip to shove yourself against my cock, desperate to fuck my cock like you are told, and I think about closing my fingers around your throat and then I come.
27 comments
Delicious. That story brings out the Domme in me :)
Jx
J: “That story brings out the Domme in me”
Good! I shall expect the sincere thanks of all of the submissive men you encounter who get the benefit of this *smile*
Ferns
Confused the hell outta me for a second lol!
But heh I do get a kick otta boys doing boys so gots you a temp sex change.
Coug
Mmmmh … What I love about your stories is that they are almost stream-of-consciousness-like, putting you right in the middle of what is going on in them…and of course the 'you', making wide-eyed submissives (like me) imagine themselves in the place of said 'you'.
This one really made me purr and my imagination run wild. I am, in fact, a knife-play kinda girl … the potential that it might hurt me real bad is such a huge turn-on…
*purrs some more*
Oh I have to agree with N. Even when the actions in your stories are not a turn on for me (sorry, not a knife gal), the way you tell the story is just so incredibly hot!
Coug: “But heh I do get a kick otta boys doing boys so gots you a temp sex change.”
Me too, especially if I am one of them!
Ferns
N: “What I love about your stories is that they are almost stream-of-consciousness-like, putting you right in the middle of what is going on in them…and of course the 'you', making wide-eyed submissives (like me) imagine themselves in the place of said 'you'.”
*happy smile* That is such lovely and welcome feedback, thank you.
“…the potential that it might hurt me real bad is such a huge turn-on…”
Yes! And from the other side, it's the fear… getting some genuine fear out of that potential is white-hot!
“*purrs some more*”
*pets the pretty kitty*
Ferns
Maggie: “Oh I have to agree with N. Even when the actions in your stories are not a turn on for me (sorry, not a knife gal), the way you tell the story is just so incredibly hot!”
Thank you Maggie!
Truth be told, I am not particularly into knives either as such, but I like them very much for the obvious and blatant potential in threat and action… Yummy!
Ferns
Melting growl . . . . Can someone growl and melt at the same time? Sure would be interesting to try!
XXXXXXX
“Can someone growl and melt at the same time?”
I'm pretty sure I'd growl
And scream
And say “FFS somebody do something I'm bloody melting!”
Coug
I think the beauty of the expression is the dreamy *here but there* of it in flowing,silky words sprinkled with grinning insight and desire.. tempered with razor sharp care, knowledge and flowing, flowing to the ocean on a current of intertwining gasps and groans and blood and *huh?* and kisses in sweaty thrusting and sweet laughter covered with tears.
Anonymous XXXXXXX: “Can someone growl and melt at the same time? Sure would be interesting to try!”
Oh gosh yes… growly melting would be… *pictures it*… delicious!
Ferns
Coug: “I'm pretty sure I'd growl… And scream”
*smile* Growling and screaming totally work too…
Ferns
I think the beauty of the expression is the dreamy *here but there* of it in flowing,silky words…”
Are you getting all poetical and sweet with me in the midst of this terrible violation? *smile* That was lovely, thank you.
Ferns
I kinda see rape as rape even though it is couched within the shadowy veil of bdsm.
I suppose the story appeals to some . I'm not being ultra critical but the concept of pleasure , domination and power is usually the domain of someone who preys upon the weak.
I will be castigated for my comments but my view is one of someone on the outside looking in.
Regards Winebottle :)
Winebottle: “I kinda see rape as rape even though it is couched within the shadowy veil of bdsm”
The difference between rape and BDSM play is consent. I don't bore readers with the stipulation anywhere on this blog that BDSM is based on consent, I assume they are smart enough to know that. When you have grown ups who have discussed what is acceptable, agreed boundaries and given consent, everything within those limits is fair game and for the enjoyment of both.
“… the concept of pleasure , domination and power is usually the domain of someone who preys upon the weak.”
You are doing submissives a terrible disservice with this view. My submissives have been strong, confident, intelligent, talented men who chose to submit to me because it made them happy. While my psychology makes it hot to see them as prey, as small things to be devoured, as under my control, as helplessly subject to my violence and sexual whims, in truth, they have a choice to stay with me and be in that position, or not. They are not weaklings who have no way out, they are strong, attractive men who *want* to be there.
I'm sorry for whatever experience you have had that makes you think this way, but for those in healthy D/s relationships, it is simply untrue.
Ferns
I am strong, confident and intelligent and I do noone a disservice. I see a situation that contrives to be a D/s relationship of substance where in fact it merely serves a purient self interest.
I did not suggest they were weaklings nor did I say there wasn't consent. for all intents and purposes the men you write about are at one with you.
O n the other handI think the ethereal world you portray through your writings serves yourself and only yourself.
No offence intended , I am a submissive and havent had a bad r/t experience( yet) I just have a different understanding than you as a Domme.
I enter my experiences with eyes wide open and your use of the words “fair game ” is something I would be fearful of.
To suggest to me that you wouldn't bore your readers with the word “consent” does me a disservice because then I have to assume everything you say is right ! Of course that is what you want , you are perfect.
Kind Regards subrob
subrob: “O n the other handI think the ethereal world you portray through your writings serves yourself and only yourself.”
I understand that you don't relate to what you see of my style of D/s relationship. That's fine, there are a million different kinds of relationships and I make no claim to 'one true wayism'. I write about what I know, what I find hot, and what works for me, and you are free to think of it what you like.
“I enter my experiences with eyes wide open and your use of the words “fair game ” is something I would be fearful of.”
If you “have discussed what is acceptable, agreed boundaries and given consent…” and the phrase “everything within those limits is fair game” still makes you fearful after that, then you should not to be entering into anything with that person.
“To suggest to me that you wouldn't bore your readers with the word “consent” does me a disservice because then I have to assume everything you say is right !”
I have read this several times and still have no idea what you are saying here.
Ferns
Ferns ,
I was only using “consent” as a vehicle to point out that you expect myself as a reader to assume everything is a given when it comes to consent.
“everything within those limits is fair game ” still leaves a pathway that perhaps is strewn with broken glass! If you understand my point.
Please do not take offence , I wouldnt be here reading what you write nor writing this if I didnt have the greatest admiration for you.
Regards subrob
“To suggest to me that you wouldn't bore your readers with the word “consent” does me a disservice because then I have to assume everything you say is right ! Of course that is what you want , you are perfect.”
hmmm
Personally I don't see the need to be lectured on SSC every post. it's a given, of course everything she says is right silly – grins –
she is also ALMOST perfect however only I have the Perfect Arse®
As for “On the other hand I think the ethereal world you portray through your writings serves yourself and only yourself.”
It's her blog who else would it serve ?
I'm not sure if you've had a bad experience and are in denial, are new to D/s or simply trolling by this post, possibly homophobic or closeted, or none of the above but it appears very narrow minded and judgmental to me.
Coug
I fail to see any sense in what you just wrote coug.
:) subrob
P.S. my lips are sealed from now on. I shall desist from upsetting the camp followers.
@subrob
Good, because you've done a great job of making an asshat of yourself.
I really really really hate it when people say “No offense” followed by something offensive. Really hate it. It doesn't make your offensive comment any less so.
And Coug, you not only have a perfect arse (with the R in a circle that I have no clue how to put in) but you make a good point. It is Ferns blog, it's here to serve her! Though I think you're both equally perfect ;) (No ass kissing there lol)
I didnt say anything offensive. I would suggest you read my post in more detail instead of jumping to conclusions.
If the cap fits teary !
subrob
I don't want this to degenerate into negativity, there is enough of that out there on the interwebs and I want this little corner to remain a safe space.
I have never deleted any comments from this blog yet, and don't want to start now, so let's finish this back and forth now. It is not going to go anywhere productive.
subrob: Thank you for your opinion. You are entitled to your perception, and to express it, and you have done so.
Cougs: “…she is also ALMOST perfect however only I have the Perfect Arse®”
Almost? Come on!! *does a gazillion squats*
TearyFantasies: “Though I think you're both equally perfect ;) (No ass kissing there lol)”
*laugh* No no, no ass kissing there at all!!! Thank you!
Ferns
– grins at Fern's squats – It's a great arse just not perfect. As I'm a camp follower now do I get an official hat and ID card?
Coug
Coug: “…do I get an official hat and ID card?”
Yes yes, of course, though I regret to tell you that the hat is purple, with feathers, and sparkles. On the plus side, though, there is a secret handshake!!!
Ferns
Purple will work with pink I can do that look
Coug